Creative networks flyer, more development

This is the version I sent to Becky and Steve Monday afternoon, hoping the job was just about done....

Unfortunately it came back with a long list of change requests:

The final copy was a lot longer, the front was to revert back to something like the first version with 'Off the wall' as title, The pink colour was considered too girly and potentially off putting to men, the business link logo was not to be used.... All in all quite a bit more work so I met with Becky Tuesday (yesterday) to show some ideas on how these changes would look, to try to avoid another round of revisions.


These are the changes I made using the final copy: